Monday, April 3, 2017

SBC - Week 3 - Activity 7 - Zoom Out

This activity needs your help. 

You are invited to build on to the story by adding a comment. This means you need to zoom out of the image below with your imagination...like who is holding the ice cream? What else might be in the picture if you zoomed out a bit? What might happen next?
Be sure to read others' comments first, and continue the story, by zooming out even further. We could build an amazing story. Give it a go!

So, here is the start of the story...


A delicious ice cream with raspberry sauce, sprinkles...AND a flake on top.



Photo Credit: Sean MacEntee Flickr via Compfight cc

8 comments:

Jane Bosecke said...

Susi held the ice cream lightly, careful not to crush the cone.

Jane Bosecke said...

A delicious ice cream with raspberry sauce, sprinkles...AND a flake on top. Susi held the ice cream lightly, careful not to crush the cone. 'Oh boy," she thought, "I can't wait to taste this!"

Nettie said...

A delicious ice cream with raspberry sauce, sprinkles...AND a flake on top. Susi held the ice cream lightly, careful not to crush the cone. 'Oh boy," she thought, "I can't wait to taste this!" She was about to bite into the cool, heavenly treat when something caught her eye. "Oh no! Not that AGAIN" shrieked Susi......

Adventure.wildlife.blogspot.nz said...

She slowly looked around the corner and it caught her eye again.....

Nika Rayward said...

I hear a swooping sound. A black shape zooms across my face, then I realise I'm holding nothing.

Jane Bosecke said...

Just remember...try to stay in the same tense and person...that means...Susi, she, realised instead of I, my...

A delicious ice cream with raspberry sauce, sprinkles...AND a flake on top. Susi held the ice cream lightly, careful not to crush the cone. 'Oh boy," she thought, "I can't wait to taste this!" She was about to bite into the cool, heavenly treat when something caught her eye. "Oh no! Not that AGAIN" shrieked Susi......

She slowly looked around the corner and it caught her eye again.....

She heard a swooping sound. A black shape zooms across her face, then she realised...she's holding nothing.

Lani said...

Susi dropped to her knees and started screaming...

Anonymous said...

"PLEASE! SPARE ME!" She yelled as a man held a gun to her head. The piercing sound of a bullet slicing through the summer air and a scream.
Dead